Crit Sheet for 292 Workshops

My general response to this story is–

Why?

What works in the following?  (Be specific.)

Plot/Conflict/Complication

Characterization

Significant detail

Dialogue

Atmosphere

Point of view

Theme

What doesn’t work or isn’t fully developed in the same categories?

Stylistic considerations: Underline phrases that work well and work less well.  (Give page numbers here with a brief justification.)

Pretend you’re an overworked editor.  If you could offer one or two suggestions for revision, what would they be?  Be specific.