You'll have to forgive the technical inaccuracies with this picture:
Castle's would never:
Illuminate their guard towers so that enemies could see them better.
Have a guard on duty with a halberd axe instead of a bow.
Have a band around the walls to help enemies scale them.
Have such short walls.
Have such a small moat.
But ignoring these minor theoretical points, I feel the picture is turning out rather well.
Also, it's amazing how particles can affect the render time. This picture renders in about 4 mins. on my PII/233 w/ 64MB RAM. If I add a small tree using particles in the background (the current tree is not using particles), it takes 3 hours.